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I Long to be Like You

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:new: Revamped.... new lighting, new tones, painted models and did away with awkward lines between photos for better blending. Hope you like. :heart:

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Stay low...
Soft, dark, and dreamless
Far beneath my...
Nightmares and loneliness

I hate me
For breathing
Without you
I don't want to
Feel anymore for you

Grieving for you
I'm not grieving for you
Nothing real love can't undo
And though I may have lost my way
All paths lead straight to you

I long to be like you
Lie cold in the ground like you

Halo
Blinding wall between us
Melt away and leave us alone again
Humming, haunted somewhere out there
I believe our love can see us through in death

I long to be like you
Lie cold in the ground like you
There's room inside for two
And I'm not grieving for you
I'm coming for you

You're not alone
No matter what they told you, you're not alone
I'll be right beside you forevermore

I long to be like you, sis
Lie cold in the ground like you do
There's room inside for two
And I'm not grieving for you

And as we lay in silent bliss
I know you remember me
I long to be like you
Lie cold in the ground like you
There's room inside for two
And I'm not grieving for you
I'm coming for you...

~ Evanescence, "Like You"



Hope you like. xo

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Stock credits (THANK YOU!) :

!Odessa11stock (account deactivated) | !Rebecca-Parker-Stock (account deactivated)
~Nataly-Stock - [link]
*Eirian-stock - [link]
*rustymermaid-stock - [link]

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Image size
2600x1882px 2.29 MB
Make
Canon
Model
Canon EOS DIGITAL REBEL
Shutter Speed
1/60 second
Aperture
F/5.6
Focal Length
163 mm
ISO Speed
100
Date Taken
Apr 10, 2009, 2:47:25 PM
Sensor Size
19mm
© 2009 - 2024 Aeirmid
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theblackbx's avatar
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

Very good job!
Highlight

Something that I want to highlight about this piece is how the colors merge together and work along to give this sort of peaceful feeling, which works pretty well along with the actual piece.

You can really feel a connection between this 2 personas, even though there's no physical contact or whatsoever, which I think is a very impressive thing to do.

Composition


Your composition is really good, I personally think that this piece is very readable. Starting at the center where the the focus relies and then driven around all the way to the river part where the second focal point is found, and then back to the center. Even though there's just a tiny little highlight in the river area that takes away some of your focal attention at first sight, it makes you notice the importance of the second character perfectly settled in the river.

Overall, again, Really good job, congratulations!
Keep it up <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=":) (Smile)"/>.